Quadrilha punk

Judy is a punk,
Sheena is a punk rocker,
Suzy is a headbanger.

Judy went down to Berlin with Jackie,
Sheena had to break away,
And Suzy... Stop that girl. There she goes again.

Carlos Ramone de Andrade.

Quadrilha (by Drummond) in english

Poetry analysis

The Brazilian poet Carlos Drummond de Andrade (1902-1987) usually wrote his poems without rhymes and fixed forms. So, everyone can understand, does not need to be a speaker of the Portuguese language. I’d like to comment a Drummond’s poem.

See the beautiful structure of the poem bellow (translated by me). It talks about the mismatch between lovers:

Quadrilha

John loved Teresa that loved Raimundo

that loved Maria that loved Joaquim that loved Lili

that loved no one.

John went to the United States, Teresa to the convent,

Raimundo died of disaster, Maria remained alone,

Joaquim committed suicide and Lili married J. Pinto Fernandes

that had not entered into the story.

Understanding the mecanicism/determinism:

Now, read the poem again from the last verse to the top, making the construction of the relationships between lovers. You're going to understand the mechanic determinism at the poem:

Lili married J. Pinto Fernandes, consequently, Joaquim (who loved Lili) became desolated and committed suicide.

Maria (who loved Joaquim) remained alone, because Joaquim comited suicide and Raimundo (who loved Maria) died of disaster.

Teresa (who loved Raimundo) was desolated because Raimundo died of disaster, so she went to the convent.

John (who loved Teresa) stayed without Teresa because she went to the convent, so he went to the USA.

Other details about the names at the poem:

1- Everyone in this poem shows their first names, except Lili and J. Pinto Fernandes. Why?

2- The poem says "Lili loved no one". So why did she married? She was the only one!

Possible answer:

J. Pinto Fernandes is the only person who has family name at the poem. Furthermore, he hides his first name. Why? It give us a clue that J. Pinto Fernandes is a powerful man, a influent person, with a powerful family name. When the poet says "J. Pinto Fernandes that had not entered into the story" he indicated that Lili married Mr. Fernandes just because he is rich (social climbing, interest).

Everyone at this poem has real names (John, Teresa, Raimundo, Maria, Joaquim), but Lili is a codename (or nickname). Lili is not a real name (it's like Bill for William) so she hide her identity (in other words, Lili does not have courage to face life, to face people, so she married for social interest).

Or maybe "Lili" can be "Lillith", the rebel, the first woman on Earth, the symbol of fatal woman (see the Legend of Lillith on Kabbalah for more details).

Observation about the title of the poem:

The title of this poem refers to a popular dance in Brazil, which consists in a constant change of partners (remember that the poem talk about mismatch between lovers).

P. S: About the dance "Quadrilha", the changing of partners is not in a sexual sense. It is just a constant movement of the dance, there's no body contact, basically just hands in hands. But Drummond uses "Quadrilha" as a methafor.

Renan, 

April, 8, 2008.

Quadrilha = Brazilian typical dance

Antes tarde do que nunca...

Acho que finalmente consegui cumprir a tarefa-desafio para a disciplina de Sistemas Nacionais e Internacionais de Comunicação ministrada pelo prof. Dr. J. Edgard Rebouças em 2004 enquanto eu ainda cursava a faculdade de Comunicação Social, turma de Publicidade e Propaganda.

A tarefa consistia em construir uma analogia entre as relações capitalistas das empresas de comunicação e o poema "Quadrilha" de Carlos Drummond de Andrade. Mas antes de continuar, quero postar aqui outro poema de Drummond:

Voltando ao poema "Quadrilha", ele foi acertadamente bem analisado e explicado pelo professor em sala de aula. Depois, em casa, após dias de muita pesquisa e leitura sobre compras, vendas, sociedades e fusões entre empresas, e após várias tentativas frustradas de construir o paralelo entre a história das empresas e o poema, o melhor resultado só veio agora em 2015. Ficou assim:

A Globo amava o Bradesco

que amava a Samarco 

que amava a Vale 

que não amava ninguém. 

A Globo foi para a França, 

o Bradesco correu para a bolsa, 

a Samarco poluiu o Rio Doce 

que morreu de desastre 

e a Vale foi vendida por F. Henrique Cardoso 

que não tinha entrado na história.

 

Jornal de Brasília, coluna "Esplanada", de Leandro Mazzini. Edição 14508 de 17/11/2015, página 15.

Agradecimentos:

Ao prof. Edgard - obrigado pelas aulas que tanto me acrescentaram e cujo conteúdo ainda guardo na memória e nos cadernos.

E aos meus colegas formandos de 2005.